For literacy we have been reading the book Where the Wild Things Are by Maurice Sendak.
As part of our writing we wrote descriptions about a wild thing and. Our teacher Miss Percy showed me and my class a few pictures and choose one that we had to describe.
Where The Wild Things Are - Written and illustrated by Maurice Sendak
Here is my writing.
The wild thing’s has yellow eye’s that glows in the dark. It has the sharpest claws out of the wild things that are sharper than his horns and his hair looks like a lion’s mane that is bushy like a foxes tail. He is unique cause he is a gigantic wild thing that has a razor-sharp beak they called him shadow blade. He is the emperor of all wild things.
Kia ora Malia,
ReplyDeleteI love the use of the word emperor and the name of your wild thing!I can see you have tried to use some interesting vocabulary in your writing. Your next step is to read your writing and check that you have the right punctuation. I think your wild thing is the one on the far right because of your description about the beak... but I'm wondering if it is the one on the left because of the mane and the horns description. I think I might need some more clues in your description.